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Aastha, a Common girl of 18 - Part 5 : A story by Sreeja (Nakshatra)

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Part 5: Common girl of 18


Intlo valandarni pelli ki opinchkuntadi tarvata ah vishayam sameer ki chepagane message lo edo vinta jargnatu phone connect avtadi
Tarvata nemadi nemadi ga sameer pravartanalo change ravatam modalavtadi naksh dagra tana kutumbam gurchi chedu ga matladatam modalu pedtadu mi annaya veli em chestnadu australia lo ocheyochu ga ani ah mataki inka naksh apukoleka sameer ni tidtadi ma valu em chestaro niku enduku tanu akada kastapdtnadu nilaga kaliga aite ledu kada valu cheparu nitho nuvu settle ithe ne pelli chestam nanu echi ani ledante ledani mundu dani gurchi alochinchu ani tidtadi. aina ni kutumbam ki adapilaki respect evatam kuda radu ni tamudu chudu nenu college ki velte titadu nanu ade mi akkalu velte alage cheste evarana urukuntara na family joliki vaste narikesta emana unte nanu anu padta kani na family joliki kadu emankuntnavo ani cheptadi.
apudu sameer vammo mi abhi chala soft mi rahul australia lo undi phone chesi butulu tittadu nanu ani antadu.
Next one day nenu job cheynu ila rikam aludiga vasta ani antadu sameer ah mata ki inka kopam vastadi naksh ki
Tanki apde telstadi tanem matladana ventane abhi ki informer ga chestnadu sameer ani naksh em chepna ventane sameer abhi ki phone chesi 10 kalpinchi cheptnadu ani.
Elopu sameer naksh ki phone chesi malli katnam emi teskurava ani adgtunaru ma mum ani cheptadu
Inka patarani kopam vastadi naksh ki asala urkuntna ani rechipotnav siggundali ma family gurchi unkoka mata matladina asala katnam gurinchi ela adgtaru ma valu evakunda pamptarani ela ankuntnaru okavela aunty adgna nuvu na dagra adgtnav ante enti ardam pelli ki munde ela adgte repu pelli ayaka inkela chustavo nanu na kutumbani. nanu eni anina parledu kani na kutumbani ane arhata niku ledu. nuvu nanu preminchava leka na dabbu na ani adgtundi . nenu intha kalam enduku una ante nenu ni venta padala nuve na venka padav ani ma valki telitam kosame. nuve anav ga ma anna phone lone dadipinchadu ani india vastnadu epudu chusko mari nuvu valne tatkolenapdu ma total family ni ela edurukuntav . intlo opinchkotam kuda telidu amai laga house arrest chestaru ani antav nenu intha elanti vadni ela preminchi mosa poya ani anpistundi naku ani antadi. Ah matalu vini sameer sry ra ma friend matalu vini ala chesanu ah roju .
naksh: oh mi frd mana pelli ayaka nanu odilimantadu odilestava .
sameer: sry ra please pone manam pelli cheskundama sakhi lo la donga pelli 5 yrs tarvta chepdam nuvu ekada duram avtavo ani ala matladtna antadu. Naksh ki kopam inka pergi ha sare cards veyidam proof ki ithe register office lo pics kuda undali antadi vetakaramga.  Apudu sameer nuvu cheinchagalave edaina ma tamudu college ke velina danvi edi cheyleva antadu. Shut up niku nenu ela kanpistna intlo opinchmante opinchatam telyadu nenu ala pergala lechipoyi ravatanki 
niku nanu preminche right ledu ma valni titte right antha kana ledu get lost ani cheptadi.
Ala bada padtu oka night srinivas savithri tho matalu vintadi naksh
Nana ki em kaledu bayata padindi danilonunde lekapote em ipoyedo dani ekadki teskelpoyevado ani. Naksh edustadi baga ventane srinivas ochi nuvu endku badapadtav ninu odulukunandku vadu bada padali gani nila evaru true ga love cheyatla ra gudiselo kuda unta ani mata echav vaditho naku telsu ani antaru. ah mataki shock avtadi ela telsu edanta vilki ani.
edanta jargesarki engineering 2nd year lo untadi naksh..Australia nunchi rahul tirgi vastnadu holidays ki ani telstadi andaru happy feel avtaru. Ala happy ga una time lo sammer phone vastadi naksh ki iam sorry jargipoindanta ipoindi odilesadam em cheymana chesta ani kani naksh namakam poyaka inka kalsi undatam waste nenu nikosam chanipota anav kada ma anna tho chusta undu ni kante ekuva preminchevadni na jeevitam lo bharta ga ponduta ani cheptadi. apudu sameer antadu edanta mi intlo drama adtnaru and mi anna love failure kada adi kevalam niku manchiga pelli samandalu ravani ah amai ni odilimanaru anta mi dad so ala mi anna failure ayadata anduke ninu odilimanaru ani cheptadu. Ah mata vinagane naksh ki edupu agadu kani sameer epudu e mata chepna tanani namaka droham chesadu ani atani matalu gurtuku techkuni titti petesedi. Rahul tirgi ragane koni days ki adgtadi nakosam odilesava nijam chepu ani edustu. Apudu antadu rahul shez not worth to me ra intiki velanu opidam ani kani nanu preminchala anesindi ra inka fool ayanu dad mundu ah bada tho australia velanu anthe kani nikosam kadu ra ani cheptadu. Aina naksh chudu nijamga love chesnodu ithe ninu ala odilayadu kada nuvu phone cheste switch off cheyadu kada nuve alochinchko ra inka ani velpotadu bayataki. Roju rojuki naksh ki sameer mida asahyam pergipotu ochedi sameer phone chesi em matladina archedi tittedi na pelli card tho mi intiki vastanu ma kaboye husband tho nen epudu cheskuna sare pelli ani samadanam chepedi.
Anand: bale chepindi vedavaki
Praveen: ha lekapote adapilani edpistada

Okaroju naksh tanki telikunda edustunte abhi ochi manam oka game adadama antadu emtadi antadi. Abhi:nenu na manasulo feelings chepta nuv nivi chepu antadu.
Naksh: Ok
Abhi: ni happy moments enti life lo
Naksh: na childhood with family and ruqu
Abhi : naku mana family inka ni weak points chepu
Naksh: naku starting trouble undi but okasari start cheste I will complete the work
Mari niku elanti wife kavali antadi
Abhi: emo telidu ra but ma friends andaru cheptnaru amailu shopping chestaru baga asala pelli ayaka mata vinaru knotamandi parents ni chudaru ani naku bayam vestundi elanti amai vastado ani antadu.
Naksh: ah mataki hahha ani navtadi
Abhi: niku evari mida aina kopam unda naku ithe ma team lead saketh gadi mida undi vedava champtnadu edava over action vadu nenu entha work chesna rating naku evatla antadu
Naksh: ha undi sameer mida okasari kalste vadi sangati chepta antadi
Abhi: ah chance undo ledo telidu but nuvu epudu vadni kodtava antadu
Naksh: ela annaya antadi
Abhi: eduruga una pillow teskuni dini sameer ankuni kotey kopam tagudi
Naksh: ha sare ani oh kumestadi full titestadi kopam poye varku kotti iam monark natho petkoku ani pedaga navtadi.
Abhi: full ga navutu elage kopam unte terchko evari mida aina sare relief untadi dull ga kurchoku ani chelli ki anam tinpistadu.

Naksh sameer ki ala chepi abhi dagra chepinde gani tana manasulo tana prema ni kolpoya ane bada mosapoya ane kopam lolopala kungipoyela cheseedi roju rojuki .alage vala amma tho mata teskuntadi naku istam lekunda evarni pelli cheskomani balavantam petodani.  Ala ani tanaki intlo undatam kuda istam leka tana friend sarayu dagra ki veltu undedi. Tana friend ki roju rojuki chala dagra ipotu undedi ela ante roju nightouts chesevaru valu kevalam kaburlu chepukotam kosam. sarayu civils ki prepare avalani and epudu valu edaru samajam kosam edo okati cheyalani desam lo jarige anyayala gurchi matladu kuntu undevaru. Sarayu naksh edaru kanisam rojuki 18 gantalu kalise undevalu kevalam podkotanki matrame intiki ochedi naksh. Vala kaburlaki anthu anedi undedi kadu. Prathi roju sarayu ki patalu vinatam alavatu slow songs vintu undedi kani naksh ki fast beat vinatam istam. Sarayu kosam vinatam modalu petindi kani ah pataloni ardalanu nemadi ga ardamchesukuntu nemadi nemadi ga badalo digipoyedi naksh tana jeevitani talchukuni kani ventane badani digamingukuni anedi ente babu friend love fail ithe badapogatatanki fast beat pedtadu evadana nuvu ente e tragic songs ani navedi sarayu tho. Naksh entha dagra aipoindi ante sarayu kutumbaniki roju tanu velina velakapoina intiki sarayu vala mummy naksh kosam bojanam prepare chesedi. prathi pandaga ochina sare tana kutumbam lo oka sabyuraliga ankuni sarayu vala nana garu naksh ki batalu kone varu alage sarayu vala tamudu sontha akka lane tanatho kuda undevadu. Akarki sarayu vala pinni lu babayalatho saha naksh ni vala kutumbamlo oka amai laga ankunevaru naksh ni. Alage naksh kutumbamlo kuda ankunevaru and savitri sarayu ni naminanthaga naksh ni kuda namedi kadu.Naksh pratidi discuss chesedi sarayu tho tana friends family edi kuda dachukunevaru kadu.china china santhoshala nundi peda peda badalu daka matladkunevaru edaru. okaroju sarayu vala relatives pelli ani chepi oka varam rojulu patu vurelalsi ostundi. Tirgi ochaka edaru college ki veltu pelli  gurinchi ah varam rojula kaburlu chepkunta vuntaru. Apude cheptadi naksh ki sarayu vala mamaya gurchi tana peru shekar ani.tanu chala funny ani tanu oka love failure ani ah amai kosam eduru chustu vundipoyadu ani ah amai peru silpa ani. Pelli lo chutalandaru kalisi sarayu ni edpincharani  cheptadi. Naksh adugtadi enti love failure ah erojulo kuda abailu antha true ga love chestunara ani adgtadi. Sarayu cheptadi ha unadu mari adoka lokam ani cheptadi. Naksh antadi ventane avnu unaru nanu odilesi sameer laga andaru undaru ga for example na friends unaru ga Shankar and phani ani antadi .
Sarayu: antadi Shankar and phani?
Naksh: Niku telidu kada valu parchayam chesta na life lone best validaru annayala tarvata vale naku best friends . Vala characters gurinchi chepalante valu platinums tho samanam ra ani antundi naksh. Antha gopavala vala ani adgtadi sarayu.
Naksh: Gopavalu ante mari atha gopavalu kadu gani na drustilo valu great e ra nanu valu golduu ani pilstaru ani cheptadi.
Sarayu: Oh avna antadi.

Naksh:Avnu valni niku parchayam chesta pada ani ah roju evening vala muguru epdu kalise adda ki teskeltadi sarayu ni. valaki phone chesi orey bayalderara miridaru ani adgtadi naksh. Ha vastnam ra phani gadi gurchi niku telsu ga late chestnadu getting ready antadu Shankar. Elopu sarayu adgtadi asala valu niku ela parchayam ani adgtadi naksh ni sarayu. Valu naku inter friends madi girls college kani valu salma ki tution friends naku oka roju valni teskochi parchayam chedamani teskochindi salma ah roju oka amai road mida velta unte manchi kathi lanti dress veskuni. Adi chusi shankar veli dress bagundi ani cheptadu ah pilla ki but ah amai popam show cheste adi chusi tatkoleka manodu hello nenu mi dress bagundi ananu athe miru bagunaru ani analedu kadandi ani chepadu.anthe ah papaki gali tush aindi ani navtatdi naksh. Ventane sarayu kuda navi mari phani ani adgtadi vadu chala simple calm but jokes baga vestadu chala caring ani cheptadi naksh. Elopu araganta ayesarki malli phone chestadi. Vastanara miru leka velpomantara ani vastnam anagane endku ra ala pelli kodukulaga ready avtaru gantalu gantalu ekada waiting twarga randi ani titti phone petestadi. Sarayu tho cheptadi ochestaru 5 mins ani. Alage 5mins ki valu ochi akada full enjoy chestaru  alage shankar guidance kuda istadu  badalo una naksh ki emani ante papa golduu epudu nuvu endku badapadtnav if sameer was correct memu sivashambo movie type lo ochi help chesevalam kani tanu correct kadu kada life lo edi oka dream ani marchpo kasta pain gane untadi but nenu chudu vinnu ni marchpotanki try chestna adi odilesaka nenu pichodni ipotunte nuve e ga chepav nuvu epudu heights lo undali adi tirgi ochela nuve cheyi manchiga settle ayi buddi chepu ani . ah roju nuvu lekapote nenu em aipoyevadno same e roju nuvu ela dull ga ipote maku nachadu so past ni marchpoku alage future jagrata ani cheptadu.ah matalaki naksh full smile istadi Akada modati sari chustadi sarayu naksh ni antha santhoshamga undatam chala rojula tarvata. Tirgi velpotu naksh antadi sarayu tho chusava sarayu valtho unadi oka aragante kani valu naku echedi jeevitantam santhoshamga undagalige balam ani. naksh sarayu ni intidagra dimpi nenu repu podune vasta ani chepi velpotadi.

Will post the next part soon...
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AUTHOR: Nakshatra, is the Pen Name of author, who publishes all her stories on this name.




                                                          

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