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Aastha, a Common girl of 18 - Part 3 : A story by Sreeja (Nakshatra)

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Part 3: Common girl of 18


Marchpoyanandi naksh ki blacky ani unko friend undedi gurtunda school lo tanu elanti amai ante chala posh only naksh tho matladedi inter lo migatavalni antarani valani chusnatu chusedi tanki kuda ruqu ante kulle andi. Tanani blacky ani pilchedi naksh. Only naksh tho lunch chesedi naksh food tinedi. One day ruquni edo ante naksh ki kopam ochi andari mundu lagi piktadi champa mida naksh blacky ni dantho kopam tho batayki veli kurchuntadi. Andaru antaru veli teskura antaru blacky ni naksh tho. Ah mataki naksh veli pakana kurchuntadi da veldam naku akalestundi sry kotnandku ani. Nakem akarla nuvve mekku baga antadi blacky.  Naksh navtu nuvu endku edustnav nak telsu le nen kotnandku kadu kada ani apudu blacky antadi marendku reason chepu chudam antadi. Akada lunch cheytanki nuv box teste ni box lo evaro cheypetatam vala kada ani antadi vetakaramga. Avnu nik telsu ga naku ala chiragu ani antadi blacky. Danki naksh navi inka eni days ela nuvu marav sardaga friends andaru kalpi tinte emti ni problem antadi naksh. Danki blacky nuv tapa na plate lo hand petatanki evarki right ledu antadi serious ga. Sare pada na anam tinduv gani nene tinpista niku ani teskeltadi navistu.Ala rojulu santhosamga ga nadustu untay sudden ga ashok vere urlo petna business lo loss ochindi ani telstadi intlo ah vishayamlo andaru nirutyaha padtaru badatho
Tanani andaru tidtna ma anna em tappu chesi undadu mikevarki tanani ane arhata ledu ani tidtadi vala pedama valni naksh.
Apdu popam naksh edustu gurtuku techkunta untadi tana china age lo oka roju urelalsi oste ashok family tho naksh ni teskeltanki ostadu intiki kani tanki exams vala odili velalsi ochidi apudu tirgi ochaka cheptadu naksh tho ashok nuvu epudu edvakudadu nuvu ala edustunte naku chinapdu nen hostel lo join ayina days gurtochayi antu edustadu
Ashok wife suhana even tanu kuda naksh ni kuturla chuskunta untadi vodina la kakunda
Valki kuturu pudtadi kushali ani amenu teskuni business kosam bombay veltaru kani akada 3 yrs happy ga una sare sudden ga loss ratam enti ani think chestu untadi

Next day college kelaka blacky ochi pada boost (blaky lover  10th class lo ma faculty) dagra keldam evala ani chepi teskeltadi  fruits watch inka ani koni. Naksh ki avemi nachaka poina thodu veltadi tirgi ochesetapdu chikati pade sarki bike mida veltu skid ayi padipoyi leg ki tagili bleed avtunte pakane road mida evaro veltunte annaya please nanu inti dagra drop cheyara ani adgte tanu alage drop chestadu. Rahul chelli ni chusi ah dabalatho shock ayi ventane hospital ki dressing teskeltadu. Apudu tanu dressing cheyinchukuntu road midaki chustunte akada oka bike ochi pakana atm unte danki gudukuni lopalki velpotadi. Ah abai ki full dabalu tagultay. Ela aindi ani andaru adgte ah abai ni nenu atm mirror chuskola ledankuni munduku ponicha ani antadu. Andaru serious ga una time lo naksh pakakakka navestadi popam navu apukoleka. Intiki ochesaka intlo andaru chusi edpistaru mari intha pedha katu katav ente intha tension petocha mamalni ani.
Naksh: ah matram petali le lekapote miru control lo undaru ani navtadi.
Ah tarvata koni days ki college keltadi vala friends antha blacky gurchi tappu ga matladta unte emaindi ani adgtadi. Apudu cheptaru nuvu dantho tirgaku adi boost tho pichi veshalu vestundi aina dani kana 13yrs pedode vadtho danki enti ani , antha vini naksh veli blacky ni nuvu nina boost home velava ani adgtadi. Blacky abadam cheptadi ledu ani. Abadam chepaku proof undi na dagra mrng 4 ki em chestnav akada niku em pani undi ani inka natho matladaku abadalu kuda nerchkunav antadi. Ha anitki proofs untay niku na prema viluv niku em telstade preminchi chudu telstadi ni monditananki ni mogudu edustadu antadi blacky naksh tho. Class start ayi kontasepatki blacky sry ani book lo motham rasi pamptadi . edaru titkuna sare modatla last ki kalsipotaru . Book enti ankuntnara class madyalo matladkoleru ga andke book lo raskuni pampkuntaru hehehe. Kasepayaka faculty ochi mi work miru cheskondi evarana matladte valni nuncho peti miru kurchondi ani blaky ni leputadi. Blacky ela aina naksh ni lepali ankuntadi.naksh emo chala silent class lo entha allari chesna sare kanpiyadu.  Suddenga blacky naksh ni legu antadi
Naksh: y nen em matladla ga side ki tirga anthe antadi.
Blacky : endku tirgav
Naksh: book kosam ina matladte ninchopetmanaru kani side ki tirgte kadu
Blacky: kasepayaka nuncho endku navtnav antadi
Naksh: edi mari bagunde nen just smile echa akada srav navtunte just palakarinpu minimum courtesy adi na noti nundi mata bayataki ralega antadi mata emi
Srav : adi bet vesinde natho ninu ela aina lepta ani sika chestadi
Naksh: amma ni chachina levanu epdu ankuntadi
Blacky: legustava legava mam ki chepta ani mam antadi
Naksh: mam e pilla nanu chaduvkonivkunda oh nuncho antundi mam nenu em matladkunda disturb chestundi nanu antadi
Mam: blacky popam naksh ni endku ala edpistav naku telsu tanu evarni kelkadu tana work tanu cheskuntadi nuvu muskuni nuncho antadi.
Blacky: chesedi leka vere valni nuncho peti antha class ipoyaka naksh tho antadi niku leadership qualities nerpidam ani ala cheste nunchove aina valakosam na bet odipoyela chesav niku nenu ekva valu na antadi.
Naksh: tappu nuvu chesav aina chendalamga ah arupulu enti road mida bindelu kotkune vala laga class ga behave chey andke ela chesa sarena ani antu oh kotkunta edaru unte madam ochi miku rendu karalu evana antadi. Ha evandi ani silent ga antadi naksh . edaru navkuntaru. 
Blacky: nuv silent anta amma chudu valki telitla ni gurchi ani antadi.hahaha
Naksh andartho kalsipoye mind set chala open so chala mandi friends. Oka roju class lo andarki flowers teskostadi sindu matram nen tom boy ni petkonu antadi. Naksh ah mataki aite tomboy tesko ani I love u cheptu istadi single flower. Paka nundi unko amai adente mona natho pelli aindi eroju dnki flower istanav I hurtu nenu divorce istna antadi.unko pakanundi nenu kuda ni lover ne kada darling ankuntu vastadi. Ha andaru na lovers e nene abai ni aite andarni cheseskunedani. First priority matram na tom boy ke endkante danki unde pogaru ego naku chala istam antu bugga giludi. Nuvu emana krishnudiva ani sindu ante naksh avne chocolate kutty ani navtadi. Nakem odule e puvu nuve petko ni smile ki edi suit avtadi niku flowers istam kada darling ani naksh ki petestadi sindu. okaroju blacky ki bike nerpistu naksh bike odilstadi dantho blacky padipodi.
 Blacky: abbaaa emte odilesav
Naksh: padava ahahahaha ponle bandi padtene baga vastadi ani navu control cheskoleka navtu untadi.
Blacky: navaku kopam vastundi naku
Naksh: hahahhaha em cheyne naksh always smiling serious ga unapude janalu naku navostadi mona emaindo telsa dad bathroom lo jari padaru lepdam ani veli oh navu nenu mum titti pakaku jarpindi nanu hahahhaha. Ah mataki navkuni edaru intiki velpotaru. Next day blacky ochi niku okati chepna nina ma Nana self lo erra note dorkindi
Naksh: ante enti
Blacky : ante 1000 note e pacha note ante 500
Naksh: endkala chestnav tappu kada
Blacky: em tappu kadu ma ille ga antadi
Madusati roju blacky dull ga undatam chusi emaindi ani adgtadi naksh
Blacky: na kompa kolerainde emadya na fate bagotla.
Naksh: let me guess nina era note 1000 kadu 20rs ayuntadi
Blacky: ha avne bujji edo chikatlo eraga kanpiste laganu adi ela tagalabadindi
Naksh: u naughty hahahaha niku jargalsindele aina edvaku niku nenu una ga dont worry ani smile apkuntu blacky face chustu untadi.
Blacky: niku epudu ah smile undali ra ni husband chala lucky
Naksh: haha I know sare em curry evala nidi
Blacky: bendakaya
Naksh: em maths ba vastadi ana
Blacky: ha avne nene odinchkuna
Naksh: naku telse ni veshalu aina nenu undaga niku maths rakapotama mai hoona nanu namuko bagupadtav ani maths explain chestadi china pilalki chepnatu.
Next day class lo gowthami ane oka amai unte naksh ki gurthostadi epdo tana dagra 1 rs teskuna ani veli panimala iste gowthami etu ra darling ani pilchi naksh ni tapi mani kodtadi netti mida.  Abba  deyam ente ala kotav antadi naksh apudu gowthami deyam 1 rs istara evarana nenu adgana ledu kada.. Naksh: em cheymantave naku okala dagra teskotam istamlede adi 1 rupee aina enthaina sare esari evanu le antadi. E vishayam ruqu ki chepte naksh veli tanu kotindi nen ithe kindaki thosesedani endke mona 10rs echav piga na frd ki echi naku evamantava ekadaka ochna danvi class loki raleva antadi.ha adikavalane chesale ni reaction chudam ani chesa phone chestava leda ani alage chesi titav nen happy danki ani antadi ala days happy ga pass avtu untay naksh ki.

Elopu savitri ochi cheptadi naksh tho mi akka ki marriage set indi ra love anta ani
Naksh: Ponle ithe ashok ekadki ostadu andaru happy ga undachu erakam ga aina ankunta untadi manasulo.
Mum: enti alochistnav antu etu ra naksh nitho panundi ani devuni mandiram dagra ki teskeltadi
Naksh: Emti mum ekadki teskochav 
Mum: nuvu naku promise cheyali love marraige cheskonu ani god mida oteyi endkante memu avamana padalem bayata janala dagra ani. Apatdaka e tappu cheyani tanu sudden ga vala mum pravatanaki shock avtadi
Sare ani otesina vala mum ni ardam cheskoleni vayasulo kopam nimpukuntadi manasulo
Pelli ipoyaka vala akka ki college kelatam modalu pedtadi naksh
College lo chala happy ga padatiga undedi naksh and vala friends tho chala happy ga undedi
Oka roju vala frds antha outing ki ani chepi veltaru but suddenga rain padesarki buradatho ne intiki ochesarki naksh ni rahul arustadu endku ala late indi pichi pichi ga unda ani intlo savitri and srinivas kuda arustaru .Naksh em matladkunda silent ga undi podi
Tarvta srinivas savitri lu panundi bayataki veltu rahul tho cheptaru edina tinandi ani
Inka rahul slow ga naksh dagra ki oste edpu start chestadi peddaga apudu slow ga nachacheptadu ala velte kangaru padtam kada bayata society bagoledu ma friend vala sis undi tanu road mida veltunte tanani edpincharanta ra ani and inka cheptu antadu days bagoledu Mona beech ki teskeli oka amai ni rape chesaru telsa piga ah pila vadini annaya ani pilstadi anta because vala chelli ki friend anta ah amai . mi friend ramantundi ra beach ki ani chepi pilchi vadi friends andartho gang rape chesadata ala unay days ani.
Unkoti chepna ma friend vala sister vala dad tho veltunte road mida evaro ochi chuni lakuni poyarata . chudu parents tho veltene safety ledu alantapdu nuvu okadanve that to ela rain lo velte maku bayam undada antha duram ani cheptu elopu table mida sapota unte teskochi olustu tinpista untadu.
8 tinestadi 9e unay ani telika next 1 unte inka chale nuv tiney full indi ani cheptadi naksh.
Inkem tinane motham nuve tinesav tinpistunte okati unchi tiney antava anagane full navtadi naksh
Daily clg ki veltam normal ipoindi naksh ki and emuna sare anni rahul ki cheptu undedi naksh
and okaroju naksh nidrapotundaga tanki gatiga arupulu vinpistay naksh ki
 legsi silent ga hall dagra dakoni chusta untadi  naksh akada rahul srinivas savitri lu arusu kuntu untaru.
Srinivas rahul tho antavuntadu odu odu ante Australia velta antaventi inkenta kalam ela bada pedtav mamalni love anav pelli anav sare ani opkuni ah amai vala nana ni ochi natho matladamante emo valemo mem ramu ante nenu em chesta epudemo studies antu Australia ki velta antnav sare velu ni istam ochnatu chesko ani.
Naksh ki em ardam kadu okati tapa tana anna love lo fail ayadu ani tappa. kopam vastadi naksh ki vala anna ni endku odilesindi tanu em tapu chesadu ani
Australia veltanki ready ayi car lo vala amma vodilo china pilodi la tala valchu kuni edusta untadu.
Naksh emo cool climate rain padtu untadi so icecream tindam antadi anna mood marchatanki. Alage ani hotel seven dagra api climate enjoy chestu icecream tini chalaga undani anna jerkin teskuni veskuntadi kani danlo munigipotadi andaru chusi navtaru.
Alage airport ki veltaru tanki sendoff echaka hotel ki ragane srinivas abhi vodilo podkuni vadu velpoyadu ra antu edustaru chinapilodlaga. Abhi apudu ochestadu dady studies ega ani odarustadu.Naksh ki lonely ness feel avtam start avtadi annalidaru lekapoyesarki .

Days gadustuna kodi nakshatra ki evani manasulo balamga natuku potu untay

Will post the next part soon...
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AUTHOR: Nakshatra, is the Pen Name of author, who publishes all her stories on this name.




                                                          

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